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Re: Help me with my English please

#21 Post by LAT » Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:08 pm

I'd go with bunny's middle option! :D

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Re: Help me with my English please

#22 Post by Cenwulf » Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:28 pm

By rewriting the key phrase:
childhoods of generations past/passed
which of these makes more sense in the context?

Past generations' childhoods
Passed generations' childhoods

I think that 'past' means all the previous generations, and 'passed' means all the generations except the currently living ones - as surely these are still passing?
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Re: Help me with my English please

#23 Post by Bunnylump » Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:48 pm

If it was me, I'd use

'history is brought to life by the stories told and our children learn about childhoods of past generations."

mainly because the children would, presumably, be the current generation, therefore the old people you have been speaking to would be included in "past" generations. If you put "generations passed" it might imply that the old folk have passed on. Which is a nasty kettle of fish to be in. :lol: :lol:

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Re: Help me with my English please

#24 Post by MBH » Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:30 pm

My rule of thumb is that if I need to think about it for more than 5 minutes, I turn it on it's head and rewrite it with different words :lol: So many ways we can say things with this language - and some make more sense than others.

The other thing about writing is who you're writing it for. Within the Council they tend to find the most obscure meanings (and problems) with anything other than black and white statements of fact. :roll: I've given up trying jokes and puns because they are always taken literally and seriously :(

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Re: Help me with my English please

#25 Post by Bunnylump » Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:32 pm

What, like when I ask kids "What's the magic word?" and they reply "Er.. Abracadabra?" :roll: :lol:
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Re: Help me with my English please

#26 Post by MBH » Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:35 pm

LOL - and all the witches and wizards give themselves away by diving behind solid objects :lol:

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Re: Help me with my English please

#27 Post by Bunnylump » Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:07 am

I'm totally sure that the kids in the Co op at Truro thought they were having a visitation from Hogwarts when my son and his girlfriend walked in there in their gowns the other day. There was a row of little kids with their jaws hanging open! :lol: Shame he couldn't abracadabra the Co op pasty into something edible...
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Re: Help me with my English please

#28 Post by Redfraggle » Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:58 am

It's all been sorted. Scurra had a look at my front page and Bunny and Scurra are both in agreement that it should read 'generations past' or 'past generations'. So it will be tweeked this morning. The site should be up and running by next week so Im all excited and you will all get a look-see. :mrgreen:

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Re: Help me with my English please

#29 Post by MBH » Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:23 am

Redfraggle wrote:Bunny and Scurra are both in agreement

Quoted for rarity :lol: :twisted:

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Re: Help me with my English please

#30 Post by LAT » Wed Aug 03, 2011 9:48 am

:lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: Help me with my English please

#31 Post by Bunnylump » Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:03 am

Well, in THAT case, it should definitely be something else. 8-) :lol: WHAT is the world coming to??? Scurra and I are not allowed to agree on ANYTHING. It's the law. :lol:
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Re: Help me with my English please

#32 Post by Wulfruna » Wed Aug 03, 2011 8:35 pm

Bunnylump wrote: It's the law. :lol:
No - it's all just 'past' history now :lol: :lol:

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